tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7821450983903844905.post5082844257357356417..comments2014-08-27T15:31:25.014-05:00Comments on Overton Window: Chapter FortyDeekyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08148199460732217808noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7821450983903844905.post-63140371974663804002011-03-04T12:55:51.646-06:002011-03-04T12:55:51.646-06:00there are, on occasion, good lines here and there....there are, on occasion, good lines here and there. somewhere, back in the first ten or twenty chapters i recall saying something similar. i don't remember what it was now.<br /><br />i thumbed through the ghostwriter's own novel a while back and it wasn't as awful as this. it seemed, at least at first glance, competently written.Deekyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08148199460732217808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7821450983903844905.post-20587292915656407782011-03-04T00:40:01.504-06:002011-03-04T00:40:01.504-06:00The sad thing is, I rather like this line: The lay...The sad thing is, I rather like this line: <i>The layout reminded him a little of Stonehenge, but only if Stonehenge had been built over one hurried weekend by an amateur bricklayer on acid.</i> It's rather ruined by the crap that comes before it, but by itself, it's not bad. Which, of course, immediately makes me wonder if he "borrowed" it from somewhere else.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com